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Apologies in advance for the length here, but I feel this topic warrants it.

I believe it is best to discuss this topic in four phases: (1) Are the instances of alleged plagiarism a serious violation? (2) Of what weight should Ackman/Rufo’s efforts matter? (3) Were the plagiarism allegations/instances necessary for the ouster of Gay? and (4) Was Gay’s congressional testimony unfairly received, and should it play no role in the movement to oust Gay?

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For the first topic “Are the instances of alleged plagiarism a serious violation?” I’d take this in three turns: (A) Is this conduct that students at Harvard would be reprimanded for? (B) Are the instances trivial/minor? And (C) is this conduct that should be acceptable for a university president (let alone Harvard University’s president)?

At the outset, it is worth noting that the verbatim usage of others’ work has been tallied to reach about 50 instances across Gay’s 17 published works. And eight of the 17 works include such verbatim instances. I know during your live streams you had the position “well the dissertation is 200+ pages, and a few instances of verbatim use of other words in here are not significant” (notwithstanding that I suspect the dissertation length dwarfs the length of the 16 other published works by Gay).

Regarding (A), I don’t think it is controversial that a single instance of the allegations – let alone such prevalent verbatim use of others language -- would be plagiarism under Harvard’s standards, as applied to students. In fact, even the soft paraphrasing (what I like to refer to as “seventh-grade paraphrasing”) of thesaurus-ing a verb or noun here or there is not sufficient to overcome an obligation to directly quote source material. Citing Harvard’s 1998 handbook “If your own sentences follow the source so closely in idea and sentence structure that the result is really closer to quotation than to paraphrase, you are plagiarizing, even if you have cited the source”. Students would be reprimanded for a single of the alleged 50 instances of plagiarism by Gay.

On (B), I cannot wrap my head around your characterization of these instances as minor – of course they are major violations. This is academic writing – not casual blogging or even journalism. If you present language as your own formulation, you are misleading the reader. There are two victims of plagiarism: (i) the plagiarized and (ii) the reader. While I don’t disagree that there is likely little harm to “the plagiarized” for verbatim repetition of another’s work where such language is highly technical and not novel information, “the reader” is misled about the significance of the writer’s work. Notwithstanding there is no “it’s okay to use verbatim/not cite the language of another to describe technical matters” carve-out to plagiarism rules – and it makes perfect sense that there would not be such a carve out, as otherwise a reader may interpret such technical statement as the novel rendering of the writer. Our rules for plagiarism exist to allow a reader to understand the novel ideas of a writer and, if followed correctly, allows a reader to evaluate the intellectual-add of the writer’s paper.

Also, specifically, your casual dismissal of the Palmquist and Voss plagiarism is baffling to me. Yes, her dataset allowed her to conclude an “increase” as opposed to a “decrease” (putting aside the 2002 concerns about Gay’s datasets and her willingness to share her underlying data). That is no saving grace. You cannot run a study, effectively ran by someone else to a different conclusion, and – once analyzing your data – take that prior paper and just change data (e.g. -.05 correlation to +0.3 correlation) and substantive conclusions (“decrease” to “increase”). That is so transparently wrong that I struggle to combat the countervailing argument. Additionally and specifically, Gay’s use of Palmquist’s and Voss’s statement “If racial turnout rates changed depending upon a precinct’s racial mix, which is one description of bias, a linear form would be unlikely in a simple scatter plot”, to me, is not a highly technical restatement of clearly established existing rules. To use such sentence, effectively verbatim (changing “description of” to “one way to think about”), is so obviously plagiarism (even if she had actually cited their paper, per the 1998 Harvard rules).

Finally on (B), I revert to the prior statement that the allegation encompass over half of Gay’s (limited) 17 published works. If there was a single instance (or maybe low single digit instances) or even it encompassed an overwhelming minority of Gay’s works, maybe I’d understand the “it’s just minor” position. But it isn’t. Gay has a very limited publishing record, of which half are alleged to contain plagiarism. This strikes me as clearly significant, not minor, and not trivial. And I vehemently disagree with your position to that effect.

Moving to (C), it is helpful to level-set here: this is the president of Harvard, and arguably the publicly-presumed pinnacle of higher-education leadership. Plagiarism allegations, even in commencement speeches (see Bob Caslen) -- notwithstanding academic papers -- are more than enough to oust academic (and even political – see, e.g., Karl-Theodor zu Guttenberg) leaders. If you’re willing to wholly dismiss clear plagiarism in Gay’s acknowledgments(!!) section of academic, published, writing, you certainly must rank that as more wrong than copying three sentences given in a commencement speech. And I personally would hold the president of the University of South Carolina (US News nationally ranked #124) to a lower standard than Harvard (US News nationally ranked #3), particularly given Harvard’s global and political brand. I don’t think it is, generally, unreasonable to weigh the seriousness of various plagiarism instances, however it is clear that precedent has set the bar for university presidents significantly higher than Gay’s performance.

I believe at one point on stream you made a remark “Would I care if my doctor did this?” and that is absolutely the wrong way to think about this. This isn’t your doctor, this isn’t commercial industry, this isn’t even journalism/blogging (where you also made a comment that you essentially copied language from articles). Plagiarism is the cardinal sin of academia – where your academic and novel contributions are your barometer of significance. It’s okay if you don’t see why the system exists this way – but it would be helpful to at least acknowledge that it is an unforgivable sin in academia, where it is far less relevant to your doctor’s statements. And I think it is even fair if, given ultimate power, you would create a different system and/or rules for academics based on your viewpoints – but that is not the system we live in, and far less serious plagiarism has been taken far more seriously in other contexts for other university presidents.

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On to (2), “Of what weight should Ackman/Rufo’s efforts matter?”. I don’t think I need to spend serious time here, however your writing gave it more than lip-service. Factual wrongdoing does not need to be contextualized by the identities of the individuals presenting the facts. Facts should be evaluated on their merits alone. I find it difficult to distill bringing Ackman and Rufo into the discussion into anything other than ad hominem attacks (e.g. “billionaire” or “right-wing”).

Yes, Ackman seems highly motivated to shake up Harvard (perhaps driven, in-part, by his preexisting frustrations about Harvard’s handling of his donation of Coupang stock back in 2017 as detailed by the WSJ back in December). Rufo is a culture war warrior – who I can’t help but feel has a symbiotic relationship now with Gay, who gets to point to Rufo as the “racist” enemy, while Rufo gets to point to Gay as an elitist leftist fraud he has “scalped”.

If there was no “there-there”, perhaps the motivations of the accusers would matter to explain why this received so much attention. And maybe that’s why you give it lip service -- because you don’t think there is a “there-there” on plagiarism. I think academics disagree – and those who read the research of academics would overwhelmingly disagree.

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